Here is what the professor had to say about my rough draft “WHITE PAPER”:

“You need to begin by showing exactly, with facts to back you up, how much of a problem security is. You can’t just make sweeping statements like “most healthcare personnel don’t care”–that’s just patently not true. How many breaches are there, how many patients are affected, how many doctors really don’t care?? You need to make the problem very clear before you can solve it. “

YOU MUST BE FAMILIAR WITH HOW A “WHITE PAPER” IS WRITTEN…PLEASE VISIT THE OWL WEBSITE FOR SAMPLES.

PLEASE OPEN MY ROUIGH DRAFT AND MAKE MAJOR EDITS BY ADDING SUPPORTING EVIDENCE (SCHOLARLY SOURCES) TO BACK UP MY REASONS OF HOW MUCH A PROBLEM SECURITY IS. ALSO REMOVE THE STATEMENT ABOVE MENTIONED BY MY PROFESSOR ABOUT PERSONNEL NOT CARING. I NEED TO SEE MAJOR ADDITIONS AND EDITS!

PLEASE USE THE TRACKER SO I CAN SEE WHAT HAS BEEN CHANGED!!!