when I format the text as “align left” and close up the blank space at the end of each section, the page count is 14 pages and a couple of lines. The only section that could be expanded on is the last section of the paper to meet the “Thoroughly assessed crowdsourcing in regard to the legal, societal, and ethical issues it raises and thoroughly suggested methods to alleviate these concerns.” That section can expand more into the “suggested methods to alleviate these concerns”, especially in the ethical and legal areas. If you can get another page or page and half, this would be perfect.