Please Redo attached paper based on the teacher feedback.

Teachers Feedback: Most of the paper will need to be re-written to better fit the argument in your thesis–supportive arguments (claims) are needed for how storytelling itself (within these stories) is influencing the identities you’re analyzing (Twyla’s, Roberta’s, and Harold Green’s). The paper should be a four to five paragraph essay (with body paragraphs being 7-12 sentences long). See detailed feedback in canvas document. I think the paper has a lot of potential to be great with a couple more revisions.